Yugioh story writing

hey guys i was wondering. I have a yugioh stroy that i am working on and as i go thou it i would like to post each chapater over here. i can give you the intro if you want me to. just to say what the stroy is about. i would like your guys opinion on it. It as been a childhood dream for me to do something like this. So if you would it would mean a lot to me. it up to you guys. let me know okay?

dats nice

Gimme the intro, I'm looking for fanfics to read

Sounds interesting enough. POST IT NAOW

sure i'll be waiting for it.

Alright this is just to explain things things. I will post the rest on a different post if you like it.

This is fan fiction there will be names and people that will be reference in the yugioh series. Fan fiction is where a fan of something like yugioh makes something up that has characters forms that series and involves some of the same things in the series like powers, weapons and in this case cards. It also has to relate to the original series. Fan fiction may also be considered cannon meaning that it fans made. The people in this story are not real nor do the locations expect state and country are real. The names are chosen base on people that the writer meet but his relationship to them will not be told or revealed fully just their first names. This story will tell in third person.
The year is 2014 on planet earth our planet. The date is august 24th. Our heroes have not seen each other in a long time. Now they actually meet each other again for it has been months since they all gathered together. They have no idea what will happen next. In the yugioh animated series dimension a war is rage on the planet of Yami and it fellow friend planets. The year is 2435 in their dimension. This planet makes it possible for yugioh monster well in their case duel monsters able to kill and hurt people. An evil force called the Dark hand has develop the technology that will enable them to use duel monster cards in order to hurt people despite that they would look like holograms when the machine release the spirit in the card and make it have a physical form. They have cared this power to other worlds to make it harder for someone to die. The people of earth over their learned of this and learned the hard way that they really do have the technology to do that thou they have a scientific theory for it. Earth has made the untied Union which governs the planets that have colonies that came from earth. They manage to steal this technology when they got to the dark hand planets and use it. Their duelist army that will face the Dark hand is called the Duelist alliance. The dark hand has another plain they have learned of our dimension and they believe that they can attack it and steal duelist over their due to the spies that they sent over reported that they play duel monster but they call it yugioh. They are able to use dimension portal to get over there. The dark hand technology is more than powerful enough to make the daledisk able to make holograms that can hurt and kill people.
The enemy is led by alien male Called Malk. He has disguised himself as a human. They are known as the Kibarens and he is the one of the 3 of last of his species. The other two are Jace and Saix. An anther alien race called the Protics is helping the Alliance give them technology and recourse to combat the dark hand. They are ones who are responsible for almost destroying the Kibaren race. The protics council unfortunately decides not to help them in combat and only gave them limited amount of technology and recourse that they think that all that they need. Expect they are allowed to protect duelist in our heroes world form begin captured. Many Protics were angry and disgusted at the council choice and argue that they should help them and get rid of the Kibarens once and for all. One of the things that they gave to the alliance is the technology of arsenal cards that give the user power and that gives them the power to destroy the monster in Duel monster and that can deal life point damage as well as for defense. They take the color red. Now then let us watch as our heroes go on an epic adventure that will forever change their lives. They meet at a private video game store called Digital Masters.

tell me what you think

I rate this tenouttaten

wut?

Nice story, i liked it, congrats fella

Btw, if I'm not bothering you much, can I be in your story

I guess you could as a side person. the heroes team is made of 10 and the 10th person is usppose ot be a female. okay if you want to you must give me 3 decks becuase i would use you in a duel and a lot of soilders use 3 decks so ya. also Give me the name of yourfavortie card it ill play a imporant role for you later on.

I'll give you 3 decks later, my fave card is arcana force 0- the fool

okay then you will have the power of the Arcana since you chose an arcna monster. by the ay i posted up the intro to my story

I saw, it's alright, you just need to edit some typos and grammar errors, also next time shorten it a bit, it's kinda long

id like to be in ths story of yours my fav card is Blackwing Armor master

okay then you would be a parnter with Enigmal but i would need a anmme for you. Any name.

Do I need a name too? If so, call me.......Edward Nygma

Leon

Still need 3 decks Blue eyes

I agree with Enigma,plus I wanna know what the card in your Profile pic is,can you post the link here?

Oh that i was made up i saw it and i was like eh sure why not. it not a legit card. if you want to join i made a post on the rules, you can pm me or post a reply. I found it on bing but i will give you the website. I did not make it but i do like the person picture. http://ycm.wikia.com/wiki/File:Chaos_Blade_Dragon.jpg

I wanna be in the story..call me Rancho Lancto.Mainly just mention my name as rancho.My favorite card is elemental-hero flame wingman.ALSO if it is allowed ,can u put my deck as a custom deck that works with cards called mystic-heros(their support spels nstart with 'magic of the",and their support traps start with "mystical explosion -").The decks main point is that it can sych,xyz and fusion (no pendullems cause that would be OP like DDD).Also the card that are sych,xyz and fusions must be able to equip to the player(me as rancho). The monster have simillars effs that summon from deck/grave when summoned.

Dude just pm me the deck list i won't share it. the Arsenal cards are the ones that will be equip to you. i can make you have an ability that allows you do equip your extra deck monsters to you t so okay. i put my rules upon a different topic btw. When you mean custom you mean made up cards right? anyway you just got to give me your person peronsonaltiy then you are good to go .

PErson :- cheerfull,never gives up,never lost a duel(yay).
and the cards.You can make them up but i listed some cards here :-

Mystichero battle armor supa'lancer -- effect monster/tuner/equip to player
eff:-Summon 1 mystichero battle armor monster from the deck except "Mystichero battle armor supa'lancer."If this card is equipped top the player,the player is counted as a monster on the field,His atk = atk of all monsters equipped to him

mystichero Ultima the time master --effect monster
Eff:when this card is summoned destroy all monsters that were summoned last turn.This card gain 500 ATk for each card destroyed this way.

magic of of the space wave --spell
Summon Any number of mystic hero Xyz monsters from the extra deck,then u lose 500 LP for each one summoned this way.

Mystic hero magiciswordman-- eff
When this card is summoned ,destroy all other cards on the field,Double thiscard atk,and if u do destroy this card after 1 battle and take 500 damage.

mystic hero battle armor wing of the blade -- xyz/equip to player/eff
Detach 1 xyz material to summon 2 XYZ monsters from teh extra deck,destroy them during the end phase and they cannot atk.If this card is equipped top the player,the player is counted as a monster on the field,His atk = atk of all monsters equipped to him


and so on......